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A simple 7-step Plan to Write the TOEFL Integrated Essay! - July 10th, 2017

What are the regular essay popping questions on your head?

“What will my topic be?”

“Will I have enough time to finish my essay?”

“How badly will my hand (and brain) hurt at the end of the test?”

When you sit down to write the TOEFL Integrated essay, there will probably be many questions going through your mind.

While the other test-takers around you might be bothered by those questions, you will take a deep breath, relax and write with confidence.

Why? Because you will have read this post, your guide to Integrated Writing success!

The first thing to understand is that on the TOEFL, the Integrated Writing section is different from the Independent Writing section. These two essays test different skills. They allow you to show your English knowledge in different ways.

The Integrated essay tests your ability to understand how a reading passage and listening lecture are connected.

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The TOEFL Integrated Essay: What Is It?

The Integrated essay asks you to first read a short passage, and then listen to a selection on the same topic.

You will be able to refer to the reading passage (and your notes from the listening lecture) throughout the test. Plan on an academic topic in one of the following areas: Life Sciences, Social Sciences, Physical Science or Humanities.

You will then have 20 minutes to write an essay that combines both the reading passage and the listening lecture. Sound difficult? Never fear! Just follow the steps below to Integrated Writing success.

But first, let’s look at how you can prepare for the Integrated essay.

Before the Test: Prepare!

Great news: You can definitely prepare for this part of the TOEFL.

Here are some ways you can do it:

Set a goal of doing one or two practice essays each week. You will notice your essays improve. You can test your skills with Integrated practice test questions online, or even make your own practice test by using passages from books and free lectures online.
Practice your listening skills daily. You can do this by listening to podcasts, participating in conversation groups and by using FluentU. FluentU takes real-world videos—like music videos, movie trailers, news and inspiring talks—and turns them into personalized language learning lessons.
Read current events about major topics in Life Sciences, Social Sciences, Physical Science and Humanities. There are sites on these subjects that are made for English language learners, like Discovery Earth. Sites like this are great resources for learning about common TOEFL topics. Of course, you can never guess exactly what topic you will get on the day of the TOEFL, but at least you will get plenty of reading practice!
Finally, after all your preparation…it’s test day!

Writing the TOEFL Integrated Essay Without Fear: A 7-step Plan

1. Find the Topic

Start by finding the shared topic of the reading and listening passages. The topic is the general idea that is found throughout the passages, and will be just a few words. To find it, look (or listen) for repeated words and ideas throughout the passages.

Let’s Practice!

What do you think the topic of this passage is?

Lemon, strawberry, chocolate…no matter what the flavor, birthday cake has been a tradition for thousands of years. Often decorated with flowers or candles, birthday cake is an important part of any birthday celebration.
Answer? Birthday cake. These repeated words are the most general idea throughout the paragraph!

2. Find the Claim

Ask yourself, “What is the author or speaker saying about the topic?” The answer to this question is your claim. Often, you will hear the claim after a brief introduction to the topic.

Let’s Practice!

Can you find the claim in this example? Remember, it’s the author’s main point about the topic (birthday cake).

Often decorated with flowers or candles, birthday cake is an important part of a birthday celebration for a few reasons. First, it helps the birthday person feel special. It also provides a fun activity for the party and a way for each guest to be included in the celebration.
Answer? It’s in the first sentence: “Birthday cake is an important part of a birthday celebration.” That’s the author’s main point: their claim that they are proving. If you need some extra practice identifying topics and details, check out this free interactive lesson.

3. Find the Reasons

Next, listen or read for reasons that explain or prove the claim in both the reading and listening passages. These may be examples, facts or other details. If you are starting to feel lost, don’t panic! Listen for addition transitions like “next,” “also” and “furthermore.” These transitions give you a clue that important details are coming!

Let’s Practice!

Let’s look at our example again. This time, let’s find the reasons that the author believes birthday cake is so important. Don’t forget, those transition words give you clues to find the reasons!

Often decorated with flowers or candles, birthday cake is an important part of a birthday celebration for a few reasons. First, it helps the birthday person feel special. It also provides a fun activity for the party and a way for each guest to be included in the celebration.
Answer? There are three reasons:

Birthday cake makes the birthday person feel special.
It provides a fun activity for the party.
It provides a way for each guest to be included.
Tip: Some students find it helpful to note the topic, claim and reasons (using their own numbering system or symbols) as they are reading or listening. This way, they are able to easily organize their essay later. But don’t try to write down every word you hear! Just note the topic, claim and reasons as best as you can. You will want to write your essay in your own words, anyway.

4. Find the Connection Between the Reading and Listening

The goal of the TOEFL Integrated essay is to consider how the reading and listening passages connect to each other. Take a look at the claims that you identified in the reading and listening passages. Do they agree or disagree?

Let’s Practice!

Take a look at these two claims. Do you think they agree or disagree?

Claim #1: Birthday cake is a positive tradition because it helps people celebrate with family and friends.

Claim #2: Birthday cake is a negative tradition because people should be able to celebrate their birthdays with whatever dessert they like, not just birthday cakes.
Answer? These two claims disagree.

5. Organize Your Essay!

There are two options to organize your essay: block style or point by point.

Block Style

For a block style essay, you start with an introduction that explains the connection between the reading and listening lecture.

Then, you combine all of the points from the reading in one paragraph, and combine all of the points from the listening in another paragraph.

This is an especially good option if you had a hard time understanding some of the details in the reading or listening passages (or both).

Let’s Practice!

How could you organize these ideas in a block style?

Reading Claim: Birthday cake is a positive tradition because it helps people celebrate with family and friends.

Listening Claim: Birthday cake is a negative tradition because people should be able to celebrate their birthdays with whatever dessert they like, not just birthday cakes.
Answer? For block style, just make two paragraphs! Put all of the ideas from the reading in the first paragraph, and all of the ideas from the listening in the second one. In this case, the first paragraph would talk about birthday cake being a positive tradition, and the second would talk about it being negative.

Point by Point

This type of organization starts out similar to block style, with an introduction explaining the relationship between the claims.

But instead of separating the reading and listening in blocks, each paragraph is organized around a single point. The reading and listening are connected through the detail that they share. This type of organization shows a deeper understanding of the reading and listening lecture.

Let’s Practice!

How could you organize these ideas in a point by point style?

Reading’s Claim: Birthday cake is a positive tradition because it helps people celebrate with family and friends.

Listening’s Claim: Birthday cake is a negative tradition because people should be able to celebrate their birthdays with whatever dessert they like, not just birthday cakes.
Answer? For a point by point essay, you would have a paragraph focused on “Celebrations.” Here, you would explain the detail in both the reading passage (people should celebrate by having birthday cake with family and friends) and the listening passage (people should celebrate in whatever way they choose).

6. Use Transition Words

Okay, so you have identified the topic, claim and details. You have decided which type of organization to use. Now, how do you write the essay?

First, use your transition words. A transition shows the reader how your sentences are related to each other. These words are often at the beginnings of sentences.

If the reading and listening passages have opposite viewpoints, you will want to show that you understand that by using contrast transitions like “however,” “but” and “although.”

If the viewpoints are similar, use comparison transitions—like “similarly,” “also” and “equally.” You can also use number transitions at the beginnings of paragraphs. For example: “first,” “next” or “lastly.”

7. Paraphrase

Paraphrasing (or restating the ideas in your own words) is key for high scores!

Check out the official TOEFL Writing Rubrics to see how important paraphrasing is. Try to avoid using the exact same words, phrasing or idioms as the reading or listening passage.

Here are some things you can do to make it easier to paraphrase while writing your essay:

Learn lots of synonyms (words that have the same meaning).
Build your English vocabulary.
Learn lots of sentence structures and verb forms.
Remember, you will get a chance to share your own opinion in the TOEFL Independent essay. For the Integrated essay, you want to stick to the points that you have heard or read. Don’t add any of your own opinions, even in the conclusion paragraph.

This essay is all about understanding the connection between the reading and the listening passages, and restating it in your own words as much as you can.

So when it’s time to take out your pencil and start the TOEFL Integrated essay, write with confidence.
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